2012년 7월 31일 화요일

The Ode- To roller coaster

 Dear Roller Coaster,

 Hi, my name is Christine.
 The reason why I wrote the ode is because I love you so much. When I was in Singapore, the amusement park didn't have any roller coasters, and the water park was too dirty, so I didn't ride you for about1 year. I wanted to go, but, it was too boring.. So didn't go to the amusement park and the water park that was in Korea.

 But then I came to Korea for an vacation, then I rode you in Everland, so you can forgive, right? Then, after 2 years, I came again for vacations and rode you in other different place, for example, Lotte world, Seoul land. So please forgive me!! I want you to forgive me and let me ride you forever_:( If you don't forgive me, I'll almost die!!!


However, I also want to see you at disney world, too! I think you're going to be fun there. Also, Iwent to the new amusement park " Universal studio". I rode you so much because it was school time in Singapore. Well, then I'm going to see you at Disney world- I'll make my dad go there. So wait for me!


         
                                                                                                               

                                                                                               From, Christine Yun//

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  1. Won-Woo Chung2012년 7월 31일 오후 10:34

    Hi, I'm your Writing TA. I like the sincerity in your ode. It really feels like you love roller coasters a lot. Maybe you could elaborate on your experience at Everland, Lotte World or Seoul Land. Tell us how you felt like when you rode it. :)

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